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Always coming back
to the shadows of the blues.
Remembering and hoping
there's more than a closed door now.
More than music
it was the feeling
which left trapped anyone
between your charms
making your guitar cry
at the same time you gave
stories from your soul.
You still there
somewhere, deep inside in people's heart...
Your art will come to mind.
Whenever someone needs to feel
in that sensation again.
Not perfect, i wanted to do a drawing really, and I don't know if i'll have enough time.
Dedicated to Gary Moore.
Gone but not forgotten.
Always an inspiration

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Made less personal and more general like some user suggested me. Certainly gives it some additional strength
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karmacursed Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It is pretty good, and Gary Moore was a great artist. I'd revamp this a bit and take out most of the "you" and "yours" and take the "now" out of line four. I like what you did here. :clap: :sprint:
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diana-amazin Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Student Digital Artist
thanks! will see how can modify those lines haha it was a pretty fast done thing, i'm just so shocked...it was too soon and unexpected...he was my first blues artist.
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karmacursed Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice edit.
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diana-amazin Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
thank you :D
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